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Renhai

 

 

 

 

Three Linked Renhai: A Spring Frolic

 

Stringing Things

by John Daleiden, US and Vaughn Seward, CA

 

In the Parlor
women stitch quilt blocks—
the twitter of birds.
/jd
A piece of string in the beak—
among tree buds, a new nest.
/vs
/jd
Babbling brook—
for a fishing pole the boys
find a stick.
/vs

May 6-8, 2008
 

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 Another Scoop

by John Daleiden, US and Vaughn Seward, CA
 

 

An orange crane
lifts immense steel girders—
changing skyline.
/jd
A piece of string in the beak—
among tree buds, a new nest.
/vs
/jd
Backyard sandbox—
the boy's backhoe lifts
another scoop.
/vs

May 6-8, 2008
 

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Sunrise, Sunset

by Vaughn Seward, CA and John Daleiden, US

 

Coral ledge—
a seahorse expels babies
from his pouch.
/vs
A piece of string in the beak—
among tree buds, a new nest.
/vs
/jd
In the garden rocks
a snake waits for prey—
sunrise, sunset.
/jd

May 8-14, 2008
 

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Read Additional Renhai

 

Renhai: Developing A New Form

Learning by Example

Three-Way Renhai

Renhai Examples: Sketchbook: 3-4, April 2008

 

 

 

 

 

 

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